Stark Contrasts

    

 

I am over the moon to announce the imminent arrival of my new novel ‘Stark Contrasts’.

With a following wind and a bit of nifty footwork, well, fingerwork more likely, it should be published in the next couple of weeks. As a taster, I have posted a sample of the first chapter here.

It’s a crime thriller and marks the start of a series that will feature a new cop – Detective Inspector Adam Stark, a Scotsman, working in London for the Met’s Murder Investigation Team.

Stark and his partner DC Lara Katz have to unravel a bizarre case involving someone who has decided to exact terrible revenge on people for committing what appear to be trivial misdemeanours. Spitting out chewing gum, listening to music too loudly on a train, tailgating, and barging onto a Tube carriage all have terrible consequences for the culprits.

As the punishments escalate in severity, Stark is led a merry dance. This is a vigilante-serial-killer with a difference: a sociopath with a social conscience. Question is, can Stark get to the bottom of what’s going on before anyone else is killed or maimed?

On another note, this post features a couple of prototype covers. I’d love to hear your thoughts and feedback! Which one would you go with?

Thanks and hope you enjoy the sample!

Peter Carroll

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Waxing Lyrical

I’ve written a wee guest post for fellow Scottish author Sinclair Macleod about ten lyrics that I really admire. Why not take a look and see if any of my choices grab you too?

Cheers for letting me loose on your blog Sinclair!

Words and Music

 

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You’ve Been Had!

In the process of writing, you learn constantly – from yourself and others. There are lots of great blogs and books out there helping you to improve your grammar, sentence structure, plot, character development and anything else you can imagine pertaining to writing. If you intend to write, you should pay heed to the good advice of others.

So, here’s a little observation from me that I hope you find useful.

I had been editing and re-drafting my second novel when it struck me that I had used the word had far too often. I had gone back over the manuscript and had discovered literally hundreds of occurrences. I had also started to notice when reading other writer’s work that they had overused the word as well. It had really started to bug me!

It’s funny, when you notice a written ‘tick’ like this, it can be very annoying. However, it can also be very useful. In this case, it made me think about how I might structure my sentences better to convey past tense – without inserting ‘had’ over and over again.

For example, the second paragraph could easily be re-written thus:

While editing and re-drafting my second novel, it struck me that I consistently overused the word had. I reviewed the manuscript and discovered literally hundreds of occurrences. As I read other writer’s work, I noticed that they too were overusing this word. It really started to bug me!

I don’t know about you, but for me, the second version scans much better. None of the sense of time or place is lost nor is the tense affected. It is also a much leaner 48 words versus 63 in the original.

I now try to use ‘had’ as sparingly as possible; thinking harder about how to replace it and improve the sentence structure as a result. Obviously, there were and are times I had to use it!

I’m sure lots of you have similar examples and I’d love you to share them with me.

Peter Carroll

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Driving Me Mad!

I do a lot of driving these days – 37,000 miles in the past twelve months. I think that this, combined with my clean licence and twenty five years of experience, qualify me to write this rant!

There are two main things that particularly irk me in regard to driving in the UK at the moment:

1. Audis are the new BMW’s.

For some reason, people who drive big Audis have assumed the mantle of the arrogant, get-out-of-my-way-poor-person drivers who used to love driving around in big BMW’s. Aggressive tailgating, inappropriate overtaking manoeuvres, and hogging the outside lane. It’s not big and it’s not clever.

2. Overtaking without increasing your speed one iota

More and more I am finding myself being overtaken by people travelling only a fraction faster than I am going. They stop me getting into the outside lane and pay no heed to the fact that they are pinning me up against the car on the inside in front of me, causing me to have to brake and lose ten or fifteen miles an hour of speed. If you are going to overtake someone, accelerate past and then slow down again. Switch off your cruise control, press the accelerator and watch the road!

There endeth the rant!

As an aside, there is a passage in ‘In Many Ways’ regarding motorway driving in the UK. You can enjoy that here and find out if the same things that drive me mad, drive you mad too.

Peter Carroll

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A Rush of Inspiration

I’ve been playing bass guitar since I was about thirteen years old. When I started out I was hugely influenced by Geddy Lee from the Canadian rock band Rush. As a novice, I struggled to play along with their seminal live album ‘Exit…Stage Left’ but it made me strive to get better. Lee is a multi-instrumentalist and, frankly, a prodigy. I’ll never be at his level but that’s ok. It’s good to have heroes to look up to.

Rush have been releasing records since the early seventies and the three band members are now in their late fifties. Most bands still going after this long are content to live off their legacy or have become a pale shadow of their former selves. However, in 2012 Rush released their 20th studio album – ‘Clockwork Angels’ – and it is staggeringly good! The musicianship is astonishing, no really, it’s breathtaking. Some of these songs are as good as any from their ‘classic’ albums. To be able to motivate yourself to work this hard and this well, after such a long time doing it, really is something to be applauded.

The album has a loose concept devised by the drummer and lyricist Neil Peart. It’s influenced by the Steampunk movement and there will be a novel as a companion piece to the music. For me, the standout song on the album is the closing track ‘The Garden’. I love the melody and the message in the lyrics:

The measure of a life, is a measure of love and respect,
So hard to earn,
So easily burned,
In the fullness of time,
A garden to nurture and protect
 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ivAusmXpRwI

I think Neil Peart is spot on – the most important things in life are love and respect both given and received. I must say though, I do hope my metaphorical garden is slightly better tended than my actual one!

Listening to this album, I’ve been inspired on so many levels. The continual drive to improve; the quality of what they’ve produced; the fact that they can still deliver so comprehensively ‘at their age’. When I look back over my life in later years, I really want to be able to say I always tried my best to get better – whether that’s music, writing or as a person.

I’m going to see Rush in concert next year when they tour the UK. In the meantime, I’ll keep trying to play along…

Peter Carroll

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Dog on a Blog

 

 

I am very proud to tell you that Pandora’s Pitbull has been selected as ‘Indie Book of the Month’ for August by successful US writer Richard Stephenson. I am extremely grateful to Richard for bestowing this accolade upon me and urge you to take a look at his blog and his novel ‘Collapse’ if you get the chance.

http://rastephensonauthor.blogspot.co.uk/p/indie-book-of-month.html

Cheers Richard!

Peter Carroll

 

 

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Confessions of a Twitter (M)User

Soon after the release of my first novel in August 2011 I was encouraged by the publisher to join Twitter. The rationale: it’s a free marketing tool, with a proven track record for helping people promote their books. I have to admit to being a bit resistant. My impression of Twitter was it was full of folk telling you what they’d had for breakfast and what TV programme they were watching – trivial guff. However, with limited knowledge and nothing to lose (free remember, and Scotsman after all!)I took the plunge.

Fast forward to July 2012 and I now have just short of 2000 followers and usually tweet a few times every day. I am fairly sure it has some merit in a marketing sense and sometimes I find it amusing and interesting. I also like helping other folks out and so I retweet quite a lot of stuff. It’s a strange world though and I thought I’d share some musings.

It’s not my intention to list a whole load of things you should or should not be doing on Twitter. There are already a plethora of those posts available to you elsewhere. This is my personal experience; some things I like and some things I don’t. I don’t expect you to do what I did and have massive success or ignore it and fail.

The best thing about Twitter has been ‘meeting’ a few strangers and helping them out with their endeavours – blogs, books, conservation causes etc. I think it would be stretching things to call such people friends as we’ve never met, heard each other’s voices or have any real idea about our mutual backgrounds. However, I get the impression that with a few of them, if we did live in the same street or even town, we might well become proper friends. In this virtual world, they are good people who appreciate my favours to them and help me out without being asked. They are polite, appreciative and good fun in a Twitter exchange. I like that and that’s why if I link up with someone I get along with, I will happily retweet their tweets on a regular basis.

The only thing I don’t really like is automation. It just feels a bit rude to me. The more I’ve used Twitter the more I’ve realised that actually, life’s too short to get uptight about such trivial matters. These are strangers with their own motivations and so on. I don’t need to follow them and they don’t need to follow me – my life will still go on and so will theirs! But I don’t like it and that’s why, if I follow someone who relies on automation, I’ll probably not interact with them much and perhaps even unfollow them. However, as with any widely used marketing tool, it is possible they do it because, on the whole, it works. If so, then my disinterest or unfollow will be of little importance, which is entirely fair enough.

If I was doling out any advice it would be to see Twitter for what it is – a tool to be used in whatever way suits you. If you want to spout trivial guff, fair enough! If you want to be a marketing guru and guide others, fine, but please show some degree of humility. If you want to interact with your pals or follow celebrities, be my guest.

But, here’s the tricky one. If you’re an author how should you use it? My honest answer is…I’m not sure. There are those who will talk about tweets advertising your books becoming spam if you overdo it. Equally, there are those who say you should schedule such tweets regularly and go for it. I suspect it works for some and not for others. Just like books advertised in traditional ways – some of them hit huge, and others never seem to make it. My tactic is to only tweet about my books occasionally but I could be dead wrong. The more I’ve used Twitter, seen how others have fared, and the more I’ve read about it, I’m pretty sure that stating with total conviction that a certain tactic is a definite winner for anyone who employs it is borderline delusional!

In the end, I think the best thing to do is write a really great book and do your best to publicise it in as many ways (ahem) as you can. I reckon some people regard Twitter as a magic bullet or the be all and end all of marketing – particularly self-published indies – but that seems unlikely to me. It’s part of a jigsaw and it’s not necessarily the key piece for everyone. I use it but I don’t pin all my hopes on it.

Musings…for what their worth.

Peter Carroll

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That Robinson Crusoe Feeling

Well, it finally happened. I have been Castaway on the Lost Island of Books. Find out how I am coping by visiting Felicity Lennie’s blog.

http://t.co/phqOHYW

Water, water everywhere…well, it is summer in Scotland after all!

Peter Carroll

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The Sweater Curse

I have been interviewed by Leanne Dyck on her blog. Hop on over there to find out what she asked and how I replied.

http://sweatercursed.blogspot.co.uk/2012/06/please-welcome-author-peter-carroll.html

Peter Carroll

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Ecuador – Land In The Sky

I have written a guest blog for my friend and prolific, fellow author Felicity Lennie. It is a travelogue about my recent trip to Ecuador. Why not jump over to Felicity’s website and give it a read?

http://fellyosophy.blogspot.co.uk/2012/04/peter-carroll-ecuador-land-in-sky.html#comment-form

There is lots of other interesting stuff to peruse while you are there. I may even become a Castaway on The Island of Books in the near future!

Many thanks to Felicity for offering to host my article.

Peter Carroll

 

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